Wednesday, May 14, 2014

Day 169!

Happy Wednesday! I'm sorry you will miss me today! :)

Today, you will begin your revisions on your portfolio stories! But FIRST, take a look at these two versions of a story that I wrote. Pay attention to the changes I made based on suggestions that my classmates gave during workshop. These are the types of revisions I am looking for in your stories.

Your first story should be done by the start of class on Friday. Seniors, your stories should be complete by the start of class next Wednesday!

Dry Season-Rough Draft

Dry Season-Revision 1